Subtext
Meaning beneath the words; what's unsaid carries the drama instead of on-the-nose dialogue.
The five levels
Each anchor describes what separates one level from the next — not a general description of quality. This is the text the evaluator itself reads.
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Level 1 Below Standard
On-the-nose dialogue — characters announce their feelings outright.
Example "I'm angry at you because you betrayed me."
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Level 2 Approaching
Scattered subtext attempts amid dominant direct talk.
Example A scene with one hint and the rest declaration.
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Level 3 At Standard
Balance: pivotal scenes carry meaning under the surface.
Example Small talk about weather hiding a real quarrel.
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Level 4 Above Standard
Subtext is the default; directness is used deliberately for shock.
Example A sudden declaration breaking long evasion, shocking us.
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Level 5 Excellence
The unsaid outweighs the said; silence and evasion carry the drama.
Example An entire dramatic scene without naming its feelings once.
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Building story according to: setup, confrontation, resolution
The five levels →Separating what the character outwardly pursues (want) from what they inwardly need, and the tension between them.
The five levels →Building main character with motivations, problems, and transformation
The five levels →Creating anticipation making reader want to know what happens
The five levels →Building external and internal conflicts that intertwine to enrich the drama
The five levels →Moments that shift the story's course and raise its stakes irreversibly
The five levels →The ending's ability to close the story and leave a lasting impression
The five levels →Does each scene turn a dramatic value (+ to − or vice versa)? A scene that changes nothing is a dead scene.
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