Functional Dialogue
Dialogue that reveals character and advances plot simultaneously
The five levels
Each anchor describes what separates one level from the next — not a general description of quality. This is the text the evaluator itself reads.
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Level 1 Below Standard
Dialogue carrying only information, sounds artificial
Example Two characters conversing to explain information to reader, not each other
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Level 2 Approaching
Dialogue sometimes sounds natural but serves only one function
Example Reveals character or advances plot — but not both together
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Level 3 At Standard
Natural dialogue serving the narrative adequately
Example Characters seem real and speak in their own way
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Level 4 Above Standard
Dialogue revealing character and advancing plot together
Example Every dialogue line adds dimension to character and changes situation
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Level 5 Exemplary
Dialogue carrying deep subtext — what's said and what's unsaid
Example Exchange readable on two levels: words and meaning lurking beneath
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Ability to show emotions through actions and details rather than direct statement
The five levels →Constructing the scene like a building: setup, tension, climax, resolution
The five levels →Short sentence's ability to carry deep multi-layered meaning
The five levels →Conscious movement between times, using flashback and other techniques
The five levels →Consciously speeding and slowing text according to scene demands
The five levels →Character's convincing growth or transformation across the text
The five levels →Creating and managing anticipation and emotional investment in character's fate
The five levels →Using the five senses to bring the scene vividly to the reader
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